[原创]小女孩 028 你在 OKOKOK ..

冰花 — Wed, 06 Jun 2018 15:56:33 +0000

by Richard Tornello

冰花 — Sat, 18 Nov 2017 03:07:27 +0000

WHEN YOU ARE NEARBY Edited by Richard Tornello When you are nearby we have dates, we have separations. But when you're away, you can’t even be chased away. I see you every day.

冰花 — Sun, 24 Aug 2014 01:52:40 +0000

你在诗/冰花译/梦文你在有约会有分手你不在天天见面赶也赶不走 WHEN YOU ARE NEARBY When you are nearby We have dates And separations When you aren’t nearby I see you everyday n' can’t be chased away

冰花 — Sun, 19 Dec 2004 15:47:32 +0000

ZT: 青的诗评: << 你在 >> 你在有约见有分手你不在天天见面赶也赶不走冰花的这首诗，妙就妙在最后两句的出乎意料。表面上看，似乎不合情理（“你不在“了，怎么能“天天见面”，以致“赶也赶不走”呢？） ..

阿平 — Sun, 03 Oct 2004 23:35:23 +0000

大约在冬季.................

我知道我很无理头. 晕~~~~~

冰花 — Sun, 03 Oct 2004 23:29:32 +0000

QUOTE (小平 @ Sep 28 2004, 11:28 AM)

“你不在
天天见面
赶也赶不走”

赶不 ..

小平 — Tue, 28 Sep 2004 19:28:38 +0000

“你不在
天天见面
赶也赶不走”

赶不走也得赶。。。哈哈哈。。。