东海仙子：冰花诗一首英译（请求）

请 求
Pray
BY Rose Lu(Binghua)   Tr. East Sea Fairy
 
请求上帝
I pray to God
赐予我一把神斧
For an axe
把地球劈成两叶舟
To chop the earth into two frigots
一叶载上你
One for you
一叶载上我
And the other for me
载你的向西
One ferries you toward west
载我的向东
And the other ferries me toward east
各自前驶
They move forth respectively
决不回头
And never turn back, never.
 
就这样
Thus
让你与我
to let you and me keep
永远分手
Being broken up forever.


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Pray

BY Rose Lu (Bing hua)   Tr. East Sea Fairy

I pray to God
For an axe
To chop the earth into two frigots
One for you
And the other for me
One ferries you toward west
And the other ferries me toward east
They move forth respectively
And never turn back, never.


Thus
to let you and me keep
Being broken up forever.

NEW:

请 求
Pray
BY Rose Lu (Bing hua)  


请求上帝
I pray to God
赐予我一把神斧
For an axe
把地球劈成两叶舟
To chop the earth into two rowboats
一叶载上你
One carries you
一叶载上我
One carries me
载你的向西
The one carrying you goes west
载我的向东
And the one carrying me goes east
各自前驶
They move in their own directions
决不回头
And never turn back

就这样
Thus
让你与我
Let us, you and I
永远分手
Part forever.

Pray

BY Rose Lu (Bing hua)  

I pray to God
For an axe
To chop the earth into two rowboats
One carries you
One carries me
The one carrying you goes west
And the one carrying me goes east
They move in their own directions
And never turn back

Thus
Let us, you and I
Part forever.